The first test I did was from [link]

Those are my results for Alan->[link]

Alan is nothing like you. He isn't really very cool: he blends into crowds, he hangs out on the fringes at parties, and wearing shades after dark makes him run into things. He may have sometimes thought that he was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. He's had more than his fair share of hard knocks, and probably spends more time than he ought moaning about it. And he's gotten no slack from you.

In general, you care deeply about Alan, but you're smart enough to let him stand on his own, without burdening him with your personal fantasies or propping him up with idealization and over-dramatization. Alan is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of him.

My second one was from [link]

This are my results for Eve Wolf->[link]

(28) 21-35 points: Borderline-Sue. Your character is cutting it close, and you may want to work on the details a bit, but you're well on your way to having a lovely original character. Good work.

My third one was from where Alan was done.

These are my results for Johan-> [link]

Johan is nothing like you. He isn't really very cool: he blends into crowds, he hangs out on the fringes at parties, and wearing shades after dark makes him run into things. He may have sometimes thought that he was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. He's got no emotional scars to speak of. And he's gotten no slack from you.

In general, you've kept yourself a goodly distance from Johan and given him plenty of room - maybe a little too much. Don't distance yourself so far from Johan that you stop caring what happens to him.

My fourth one is from the same as above
These are my results for Jean->[link]

Jean is only a little like you. He is not at all cool; in fact, he thinks cool is a temperature reading, and when he says "Oh, I just put on whatever old thing's lying around," he means "on the floor, where I threw it last night - but I turned the underwear inside out first." He may have sometimes thought that he was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. He's got no emotional scars to speak of. And you've been sparing with the free handouts: whatever he gains, he's worked for.

In general, you've kept yourself a goodly distance from Jean and given him plenty of room - maybe a little too much. Don't distance yourself so far from Jean that you stop caring what happens to him.

xD Johan and Jean have the same results and they are a couple xD

Well there you have it, some of my OCs have taken the Mary Sue Test ^{of DOOM!!!}

Chibi-Sheska